Does this makes sense?

Firstly, why does other school's principles doesn't read their students' blog but our school does?
Where does our privacy goes to? Every human have rights,to have privacy. Only parents are allowed to interfere our lives. Not outsiders. Principles and teachers are people who we have to respect but when they don't respect us and our privacy,why do we have to respect them back? No matter what age we are,we're still human beings. If human beings don't have feelings,why create a blog?

Secondly,What is the reason for us to go school? This is something that everybody knows. We go to school to study and develop our characters. As long as we respect teachers and do not use vulgarities in school,why the teachers and staff have to care when we use vulgarities outside of the school and not even in uniform?

Thirdly, Mr. Peterson specified very clearly that Bishan Park Secondary is a value-added school and not many other school are. The teachers and everyone there do everything just for the students' welfare and to make the school be well-known. Since some people do not know the definition of the word "Well-known",i should define it. Well-known is for the school to be known for concerning the students and Value-adding the students. If this is so,why some staffs are unreasonable and biased?

Fourthly,scolding vulgarities out of school are not breaking school rules. As long as the parents consent the child to use,why the school staff care?

Finally,my conclusion is that staffs of the school does not need to care much about the students as long as they do not break any school rules.